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So I wrote three drabbles on my phone during the boring parts of a wedding last night. I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;

S&M
Nakai/Goro | PG | 100 words

“You always hit me.” Goro mentions over dinner.

Nakai avoids it with a bottle of wine he’d given him for their thirteenth anniversary.

Afterwards, Nakai’s in bed thinking about all the times he’s smacked and jostled the younger man on camera, and Goro’s brushing his teeth.

Off camera, he barely has the guts to look him in the eye, even when he’s crawling into bed beside him.

It takes Nakai another half hour to mumble into Goro’s curls. “... I want to touch you all the time.”

“Already knew that.”

So Nakai smacks him like they’re recording a Bistro episode.

Message Sent
Tsuyoshi/Shingo | PG | 100 words

Tsuyoshi’s thinking and Shingo can tell; which is why he barges into his dressing room after the performance. Goro’s in there flipping through a magazine, but he doesn’t care.

“Tsuyopon,” he’s on the floor doing sit ups, “It’s okay.”

That’s all the youngest wants to say so he leaves.

A week later Shingo gets a text. No it’s not. So he invites his best friend over.

The door’s unlocked—Tsuyoshi still knocks.

“I've been thinking,” says Tsuyoshi.

“I've noticed.”

Shingo’s kissed before he can laugh. “I like you too.”

“More than kimchi?” Shingo asks. His best friend’s blush says yes.


Probabilities
Nakai/Kimura | PG | 100 words

It’s ten past three. They finally wobble out the bar.

It’s pouring but all Nakai does is pull the brim of his cap further down his face. Kimura grins his cheeks off and points his face up at the sky.

On occasions like this, Nakai will probably pull him into the back of a cab and peek over when he thinks Kimura isn’t looking until they get to his.

Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.

Date: 2011-05-23 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com
*Reads the fics for the 20135264251485965255147579 time* xD
They were so good (I just wish they were longer... xD)

The 1st one:
NakaGoro! Didn't know Nakai was so shy around Goro. And Goro is such a M (like everyone is S in SMAP, ok... maybe Tsu is not so much or else they would be MMAP and not SMAP... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 2nd one:
ShinTsu! Can we ever get tired of those two kids?? Because one of them can't think a better thing to make comparisons besides kimchi and the other just want to be better than kimchi or Naengmyeon or Gimbap (and yeah I just gloogled it because I never tried korean food <--- shame on me --- and I needed something Korean for this comment... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 3rd one:
2TOP. Oh God! OH God! OH GOd! OH GOD! I'm going to die.
"Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg." It's so true. I can totally see this happening (maybe it was yesterday... xD). Because this drabble was so sweet and hot. How can simple 100 words touch me so much?? Grade: <3 to the infinite

*bows*

Date: 2011-05-26 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dictionarysays.livejournal.com
Giiiirl, I'm with you there! I wish they were longer too. I miss writing actual fic. xDD even though I'm like about 1,400 words into my threesome so these are just keeping me out of my writer's block, ahaha.

1. NGL, I looove the idea that Nakai is actually the shyest (it's totally a word) of them all when they're off camera, DESPITE his chatterbox image, so it was nice playing with that. And PSHAW. Goro is M and nobody can tell me otherwise. 8DD Tsuyopon too. Or really, they're just more patient than the other three and stick with the roles they've been dealt, ahaha. (And anyway, MMAP doesn't ring as well as SMAP does ;D)

2. Pahah, ShinTsuyo is the cutest thing ever and they will forever remain my OTP! Every time I think they're not my otp anymore, I see them and I think how ridiculous I could've been for even THINKING they weren't. P: Whenever you talk about Tsuyopon, you've gotta mention Korea and jeans. It's like how with Poodle-chan, hair and bad dancing is a must. (And giiiiiiiiirl. Eat Korean food and stat! /would force jajangmyeon and bulgogi down your throat if she could)

3. Pahahah. I'm so glad you liked this one too. NG was my personal favourite and I was unsure about the ST, but this one I only liked bits and pieces of so this is a relief. &hearts And srsly! More Nakai topping Kim has to happen. It's crazy how much it doesn't. DD8

But baaaah, thank you for the sweet comments, bb.
Sorry about the long response, don't feel obligated to reply, ahaha.

Date: 2011-05-30 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com
Oh no dear, I love long replies (although I rarely writes them) *slaps herself*

1400 words for a threesome?? This must be a MUST read :P

1 - Nakai is definitely the shyest of them all. And I think this little fact is so sweet... xD. I don't know, just the image of having a quiet blushing Nakai makes my heart beat faster... xD. Goro is M. He has it in his genes... xD. Tsu maybe not (well he's M only for SMAP) :P

2 - While 2TOP is pure fire, ShinTsu is a nice pudding with caramel topping. It's so sweet it will make you have cavities... xD. And girl, feel free to shove Korean food down my throat... I won't mind... xD

3 - Nakai topping Kimura! *droolin non stop*. Especially after watching Drink! concert this sounds so much real... ha ha ha!

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