Weddings that overuse dry ice are the best

[dictionarysays]

So I wrote three drabbles on my phone during the boring parts of a wedding last night. I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;

S&M
Nakai/Goro | PG | 100 words

“You always hit me.” Goro mentions over dinner.

Nakai avoids it with a bottle of wine he’d given him for their thirteenth anniversary.

Afterwards, Nakai’s in bed thinking about all the times he’s smacked and jostled the younger man on camera, and Goro’s brushing his teeth.

Off camera, he barely has the guts to look him in the eye, even when he’s crawling into bed beside him.

It takes Nakai another half hour to mumble into Goro’s curls. “... I want to touch you all the time.”

“Already knew that.”

So Nakai smacks him like they’re recording a Bistro episode.

Message Sent
Tsuyoshi/Shingo | PG | 100 words

Tsuyoshi’s thinking and Shingo can tell; which is why he barges into his dressing room after the performance. Goro’s in there flipping through a magazine, but he doesn’t care.

“Tsuyopon,” he’s on the floor doing sit ups, “It’s okay.”

That’s all the youngest wants to say so he leaves.

A week later Shingo gets a text. No it’s not. So he invites his best friend over.

The door’s unlocked—Tsuyoshi still knocks.

“I've been thinking,” says Tsuyoshi.

“I've noticed.”

Shingo’s kissed before he can laugh. “I like you too.”

“More than kimchi?” Shingo asks. His best friend’s blush says yes.

Probabilities
Nakai/Kimura | PG | 100 words

It’s ten past three. They finally wobble out the bar.

It’s pouring but all Nakai does is pull the brim of his cap further down his face. Kimura grins his cheeks off and points his face up at the sky.

On occasions like this, Nakai will probably pull him into the back of a cab and peek over when he thinks Kimura isn’t looking until they get to his.

Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.

Comments

[zheinpathos.livejournal.com]

I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;

I completely understand ;A;/ *clutches forever*

[girltype.livejournal.com]

Nakai/Goro for a drabble it really hit home. <3!x100.

MORE.

[yue-akuma.livejournal.com]

2TOP FTW! \o/

Also... *pokes* didn't you promise me a fic? >:]

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

I apologise beforehand for the smell of fried brain that must be trailing behind me.

Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.
YES YES YESSS AND YESSS. just, what. just, omg. I guess you can imagine where it hits me, but you have no idea how hard. all that is conveyed in this one line [and there's plenty of it] is so. fucking. good. like oh I don't even-- *throws things and hits walls* honestly, there's a full-length fic in it and it's the fic I've been dying to read. XD

asdfghjkl *rewind brain*

I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;
this is like, tortures of fic writing rule number one [another is, I always get the most ideas for fic when I'm struggling with school/work stuff D:]. not that I'm complaining if this brings such drabbles to existence, but I'm cheerleading for that one-shot like a craving crackwhore. jsyk.

ahh, I'm really lost what to do, 'cause I kind of want to flail and squee over every sentence, but I can't possibly. but every sentence is worth flailing and squeeing.

like with this, I was already dead at the beginning
“You always hit me.” Goro mentions over dinner.

Nakai avoids it with a bottle of wine he’d given him for their thirteenth anniversary.
/dead. why so good? srsly.
and all that drabble is just so NakaGoro in their quirky NakaGoro ways and so good and is it me or hasn't there been enough NakaGoro recently, so thank you for bringing some. <3

but now that I think about it, the Shintsuyo one is so ShinTsuyo too, with A week later Shingo gets a text. No it’s not. - a week later! I can see this happening. 8D and aww, just how cute are they?

and then, and then--2top. I dunno. this drabble is just perfect. *shrugs* and beautiful in this quiet way and the last line is SO DAMN HOT *keeps on throwing things and hitting walls* can I marry it? I will learn to cook properly for it [whatever drabbles eat!*] and I will keep the flat clean and I will make sweet love to it every night, I just want to be with it forever. *_* /'s gone nuts.

* I don't know why but I just thought drabbles probably eat rice. o.O

[pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com]

*Reads the fics for the 20135264251485965255147579 time* xD
They were so good (I just wish they were longer... xD)

The 1st one:
NakaGoro! Didn't know Nakai was so shy around Goro. And Goro is such a M (like everyone is S in SMAP, ok... maybe Tsu is not so much or else they would be MMAP and not SMAP... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 2nd one:
ShinTsu! Can we ever get tired of those two kids?? Because one of them can't think a better thing to make comparisons besides kimchi and the other just want to be better than kimchi or Naengmyeon or Gimbap (and yeah I just gloogled it because I never tried korean food <--- shame on me --- and I needed something Korean for this comment... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 3rd one:
2TOP. Oh God! OH God! OH GOd! OH GOD! I'm going to die.
"Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg." It's so true. I can totally see this happening (maybe it was yesterday... xD). Because this drabble was so sweet and hot. How can simple 100 words touch me so much?? Grade: <3 to the infinite

*bows*

[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

OH YOU. I think you may be the ideal drabble writer. You fit so many implications and mysteries into so few words... highly, highly impressive.

S&M: Just, like... WHOAH. Goro is so casual and confident and Nakai is all avoid-y, and yet they've been going out for THIRTEEN YEARS and, ahhh... I can't help wondering just what this relationship is like...
Man. I have to finish my own NakaGoro.

Message Sent: I love the way you give us the answers but not the questions. The white space you leave is beautiful. Like a watercolour painting or something.

Probabilities:
Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.
Only 31 words, and an honest-to-god piece of fiction in itself. I adore the emphasis on "probably": as in, it could and does go the other way sometimes - but not this time. And, guhhh, Kimura begging Nakai? Now THAT I would like to read. *_*

[faiee.livejournal.com]

oh crap, how did i FORGET TO COMMENT. i read this quickly at work and i forgot to come back to it ):

i loved the first one bestest, because it's so full of nakai/goro awkwardness that is love - the way nakai just can't really seem to look goro in the eye unless he's being mr. professional <3 i love it that they're already sleeping together but nakai's just awkward and shy about things like that!

well, shingo's more yummilicious than kimchi. and so i totally agree with tsuyoshi. and shingo's looking more smokin' hot than kimchi anws <33 esp during shiawase ni narou yo. <33

and uh, 2 top hotness? <333 they're all so happy and fluffy (even 2tops!) and it makes me warm instead... i'm really being a sick person and wallowing in angst lately though, so forgive me if i'm not all over this like i usually am.

and im putting shota on my icon because he needs more love.

[tsuristyle.livejournal.com]

<3<3<3
Okay, no lie, that second one is definitely my favorite because it turned me into a gooey pile of happy, happy goo. ShinTsuyo, why so adorable? XD
But I love the first one so much too! Because never-at-a-loss-for-words-on-tv Nakai would so totally be the shy embarrassed one, even after thirteen years XD
And the last one? Hot. And I like the contrast of Nakai pulling his cap down and Kimura looking up into the rain<3

also I am highly amused by your music choice XD

[g-pumpkin.livejournal.com]

Haha! Love! Sry that I don't have long "real" comments. These lil diamonds you're writing are just fhakin awesome. Kimura begging? Hmm...what an interesting idea...hard to picture this man begging. Can't wait to read more!