Weddings that overuse dry ice are the best

[dictionarysays]

So I wrote three drabbles on my phone during the boring parts of a wedding last night. I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;

S&M
Nakai/Goro | PG | 100 words

“You always hit me.” Goro mentions over dinner.

Nakai avoids it with a bottle of wine he’d given him for their thirteenth anniversary.

Afterwards, Nakai’s in bed thinking about all the times he’s smacked and jostled the younger man on camera, and Goro’s brushing his teeth.

Off camera, he barely has the guts to look him in the eye, even when he’s crawling into bed beside him.

It takes Nakai another half hour to mumble into Goro’s curls. “... I want to touch you all the time.”

“Already knew that.”

So Nakai smacks him like they’re recording a Bistro episode.

Message Sent
Tsuyoshi/Shingo | PG | 100 words

Tsuyoshi’s thinking and Shingo can tell; which is why he barges into his dressing room after the performance. Goro’s in there flipping through a magazine, but he doesn’t care.

“Tsuyopon,” he’s on the floor doing sit ups, “It’s okay.”

That’s all the youngest wants to say so he leaves.

A week later Shingo gets a text. No it’s not. So he invites his best friend over.

The door’s unlocked—Tsuyoshi still knocks.

“I've been thinking,” says Tsuyoshi.

“I've noticed.”

Shingo’s kissed before he can laugh. “I like you too.”

“More than kimchi?” Shingo asks. His best friend’s blush says yes.

Probabilities
Nakai/Kimura | PG | 100 words

It’s ten past three. They finally wobble out the bar.

It’s pouring but all Nakai does is pull the brim of his cap further down his face. Kimura grins his cheeks off and points his face up at the sky.

On occasions like this, Nakai will probably pull him into the back of a cab and peek over when he thinks Kimura isn’t looking until they get to his.

Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.

Comments

[zheinpathos.livejournal.com]

I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;

I completely understand ;A;/ *clutches forever*

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

I knooooow.
Why Does Life Work The Way It Does?! DD8

[girltype.livejournal.com]

Nakai/Goro for a drabble it really hit home. <3!x100.

MORE.

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

NG's is the one I can really relate to the most so I'm glad. &hearts
it's so bad how nakai i really am.

I WILL WRITE LONG NAKAI/GORO BEFORE I DIE.

[yue-akuma.livejournal.com]

2TOP FTW! \o/

Also... *pokes* didn't you promise me a fic? >:]

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

IA A LOT WITH THAT. 8DD

Uhhh, it's being written I swear! I'm just not particularly fond of it so it's really hard buckling down and actually finishing it large chance it'll be >1000 words |D; And omg, idek if I'm physically able to write killer!nakai/ryo, like srsly. ;AA;

/whines forever

[yue-akuma.livejournal.com]

OH C'M'ONNNNNNNNNNN! I know you can do it! *cheers for you*
I'll give you cake and Nakai-penis if you do it, kayz? :DD?

/pats.

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

I can't guarantee they'll be any good, but I'll finish them! before I die? :*
ANDWAIWAIWAAAAIT.

In response to this Nakai penis: Are you trying to tell me you've been holding out on me this whole time?!

[yue-akuma.livejournal.com]

YOU'D BETTER! :P

And, ah-ah, take a guess~ Maybe you're forcing me to get the big arsenal out...

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

I apologise beforehand for the smell of fried brain that must be trailing behind me.

Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.
YES YES YESSS AND YESSS. just, what. just, omg. I guess you can imagine where it hits me, but you have no idea how hard. all that is conveyed in this one line [and there's plenty of it] is so. fucking. good. like oh I don't even-- *throws things and hits walls* honestly, there's a full-length fic in it and it's the fic I've been dying to read. XD

asdfghjkl *rewind brain*

I always get the most ideas for other fic when I'm struggling over a one-shot. ;AA;
this is like, tortures of fic writing rule number one [another is, I always get the most ideas for fic when I'm struggling with school/work stuff D:]. not that I'm complaining if this brings such drabbles to existence, but I'm cheerleading for that one-shot like a craving crackwhore. jsyk.

ahh, I'm really lost what to do, 'cause I kind of want to flail and squee over every sentence, but I can't possibly. but every sentence is worth flailing and squeeing.

like with this, I was already dead at the beginning
“You always hit me.” Goro mentions over dinner.

Nakai avoids it with a bottle of wine he’d given him for their thirteenth anniversary.
/dead. why so good? srsly.
and all that drabble is just so NakaGoro in their quirky NakaGoro ways and so good and is it me or hasn't there been enough NakaGoro recently, so thank you for bringing some. <3

but now that I think about it, the Shintsuyo one is so ShinTsuyo too, with A week later Shingo gets a text. No it’s not. - a week later! I can see this happening. 8D and aww, just how cute are they?

and then, and then--2top. I dunno. this drabble is just perfect. *shrugs* and beautiful in this quiet way and the last line is SO DAMN HOT *keeps on throwing things and hitting walls* can I marry it? I will learn to cook properly for it [whatever drabbles eat!*] and I will keep the flat clean and I will make sweet love to it every night, I just want to be with it forever. *_* /'s gone nuts.

* I don't know why but I just thought drabbles probably eat rice. o.O

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

PAHAHA. Why are you so hilarious? And why are you so good at inflating my ego so unnecessarily and it's not even proper fic? But that's not the point.

btw, I lurked your gazette drabbles and omg, I wanted to comment but I didn't have anything coherent or structurally sane to say about 'em and I had the feeling I would bring up SMAP somehow and that would've been wrong but I'll smear it with several attempts at flails constructive comment later because you can write about ice and I'd still probably envy your imagery.

The point is that yesssssss. Epically lengthed Nakai topping Kim fic needs to happen immediately and unfortunately, the only person I really think is meant for that is you, but I'm already begging for your takugoro fic so I'll be uncharacteristically reasonable and not beg for 2top either. at least not just yet ;DD I'm still boggled though that Nakai topping doesn't happen that often! So like, really? It's really all thanks to your meme fic that this became an issue that needs attention and srs resolving. 8DD

this is like, tortures of fic writing rule number one [another is, I always get the most ideas for fic when I'm struggling with school/work stuff D:].
IKR? Why do our priorities get all askewed?! or maybe they're just adjusting themselves into proper order~And oh maaan, I'm slowly churning that one-shot out; I keep wanting to skip ahead and just get onto the sexin' but no, I'm stopping my dirty self and trying to trudge through the development/angst/non-sexin' bits/etcetc first, ahaha. But don't get your hopes up! I don't want you thinkin' you're getting crack and then it ends up just being some bootleg can crack even BE bootleg? chalk-like mixture trying to pose as crack.

I'm NGL, the NG drabble probably ended up being my favourite out of the 3. I mean, yeah, probs has a lot to do with their recent awesomeness, but idk; I think I can relate to it the most although I'd love to be able to relate to topping Kim too... But yeah! Those two are just quirky and wrong in so many ways but we can't help but want them either. ;DD

And ShinTsu is forever cute, no matter how, where, what, why, when, etcetc. &hearts

I'm repeating myself, but the frustrating thing about the 2top one is that it just makes me want more 2top in my life. Specifically the together in bed forever part. DD8 Even if you go out of your way to not make them hot, it's impossible! Pahaha, you can do anything you'd want with it, bb, even stuff of the tmi variety. xDD

BB, you're too much but I love it. Now finish takugoro fic so I can bombard you with more long fic comment. P:

*also, wtf, why does drabbles eating rice actually make sense? although it could just be the ones that star the japanese :*

[pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com]

*Reads the fics for the 20135264251485965255147579 time* xD
They were so good (I just wish they were longer... xD)

The 1st one:
NakaGoro! Didn't know Nakai was so shy around Goro. And Goro is such a M (like everyone is S in SMAP, ok... maybe Tsu is not so much or else they would be MMAP and not SMAP... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 2nd one:
ShinTsu! Can we ever get tired of those two kids?? Because one of them can't think a better thing to make comparisons besides kimchi and the other just want to be better than kimchi or Naengmyeon or Gimbap (and yeah I just gloogled it because I never tried korean food <--- shame on me --- and I needed something Korean for this comment... xD). Grade: <3 <3 <3

The 3rd one:
2TOP. Oh God! OH God! OH GOd! OH GOD! I'm going to die.
"Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg." It's so true. I can totally see this happening (maybe it was yesterday... xD). Because this drabble was so sweet and hot. How can simple 100 words touch me so much?? Grade: <3 to the infinite

*bows*

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Giiiirl, I'm with you there! I wish they were longer too. I miss writing actual fic. xDD even though I'm like about 1,400 words into my threesome so these are just keeping me out of my writer's block, ahaha.

1. NGL, I looove the idea that Nakai is actually the shyest (it's totally a word) of them all when they're off camera, DESPITE his chatterbox image, so it was nice playing with that. And PSHAW. Goro is M and nobody can tell me otherwise. 8DD Tsuyopon too. Or really, they're just more patient than the other three and stick with the roles they've been dealt, ahaha. (And anyway, MMAP doesn't ring as well as SMAP does ;D)

2. Pahah, ShinTsuyo is the cutest thing ever and they will forever remain my OTP! Every time I think they're not my otp anymore, I see them and I think how ridiculous I could've been for even THINKING they weren't. P: Whenever you talk about Tsuyopon, you've gotta mention Korea and jeans. It's like how with Poodle-chan, hair and bad dancing is a must. (And giiiiiiiiirl. Eat Korean food and stat! /would force jajangmyeon and bulgogi down your throat if she could)

3. Pahahah. I'm so glad you liked this one too. NG was my personal favourite and I was unsure about the ST, but this one I only liked bits and pieces of so this is a relief. &hearts And srsly! More Nakai topping Kim has to happen. It's crazy how much it doesn't. DD8

But baaaah, thank you for the sweet comments, bb.
Sorry about the long response, don't feel obligated to reply, ahaha.

[pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com]

Oh no dear, I love long replies (although I rarely writes them) *slaps herself*

1400 words for a threesome?? This must be a MUST read :P

1 - Nakai is definitely the shyest of them all. And I think this little fact is so sweet... xD. I don't know, just the image of having a quiet blushing Nakai makes my heart beat faster... xD. Goro is M. He has it in his genes... xD. Tsu maybe not (well he's M only for SMAP) :P

2 - While 2TOP is pure fire, ShinTsu is a nice pudding with caramel topping. It's so sweet it will make you have cavities... xD. And girl, feel free to shove Korean food down my throat... I won't mind... xD

3 - Nakai topping Kimura! *droolin non stop*. Especially after watching Drink! concert this sounds so much real... ha ha ha!

[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

OH YOU. I think you may be the ideal drabble writer. You fit so many implications and mysteries into so few words... highly, highly impressive.

S&M: Just, like... WHOAH. Goro is so casual and confident and Nakai is all avoid-y, and yet they've been going out for THIRTEEN YEARS and, ahhh... I can't help wondering just what this relationship is like...
Man. I have to finish my own NakaGoro.

Message Sent: I love the way you give us the answers but not the questions. The white space you leave is beautiful. Like a watercolour painting or something.

Probabilities:
Nakai will probably be the one doing the pinning by the time the bed sheets are a mess and Kimura’ll probably lose count of how many times he’s had to beg.
Only 31 words, and an honest-to-god piece of fiction in itself. I adore the emphasis on "probably": as in, it could and does go the other way sometimes - but not this time. And, guhhh, Kimura begging Nakai? Now THAT I would like to read. *_*

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Guuuuh. YOUR WORDS. You're cutting me way too much slack, but thank you. /still stows the compliments away in several little boxes

NG. Umm, I'm sorry, but you've been writing NakaGoro? I want this so much. 89 And idk, Poodle-chan exudes a certain confidence about him; he just seems to have the uncanny ability to say the things the others usually wouldn't (... like a certain KY member ;D), so I'm glad he came off that way. And you know? I wanna' know what their relationship is like too! but then again, not just in fic but in rl too. Oh and, it doesn't actually matter, but I'd meant the band's anniversary but I like the interpretation a lot! Reading it back, it totally changed the dynamic for me and the deeper implications. And I really don't know how long they've been together in this anyway. :* /ends rant

ST. Omg. I can't even explain how good this made me feel. I genuinely disliked how much stuff I was leaving out so to read that it worked. SOMEHOW. Makes me ;A; &hearts

2T. There is a srs lack of Nakai topping Kim physically and it is making me really sad. So this was my miniature attempt! For now. xDD And yeaaah, that's the great thing about the two, because it really could go either way. And speaking of Kim begging, I'm totally reminded of a fic you might've wrote, missy. Anatomy of a tease? (totally just re-read it and omg, SO HOT) Oh 2TOP. Why so hot? /reduced to paris hilton vocabulary

Uhhh, what I meant to say was THANK YOU and sorry about the long arse reply.

[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

I'd meant the band's anniversary but I like the interpretation a lot! Reading it back, it totally changed the dynamic for me and the deeper implications.

I would feel silly, but making interpretations that the author didn't intend is one of my favourite hobbies (um, slash, hello). But it works that way! Because they seem so comfortable with each other...

And speaking of Kim begging, I'm totally reminded of a fic you might've wrote, missy. Anatomy of a tease? (totally just re-read it and omg, SO HOT)

Oh. Yes. So I did. And thank you.
But your drabble made me imagine something quite different. You made me think of Kimura begging and pleading without holding back a bit, totally giving his power over to Nakai. Ooooh. *_*

[faiee.livejournal.com]

oh crap, how did i FORGET TO COMMENT. i read this quickly at work and i forgot to come back to it ):

i loved the first one bestest, because it's so full of nakai/goro awkwardness that is love - the way nakai just can't really seem to look goro in the eye unless he's being mr. professional <3 i love it that they're already sleeping together but nakai's just awkward and shy about things like that!

well, shingo's more yummilicious than kimchi. and so i totally agree with tsuyoshi. and shingo's looking more smokin' hot than kimchi anws <33 esp during shiawase ni narou yo. <33

and uh, 2 top hotness? <333 they're all so happy and fluffy (even 2tops!) and it makes me warm instead... i'm really being a sick person and wallowing in angst lately though, so forgive me if i'm not all over this like i usually am.

and im putting shota on my icon because he needs more love.

[tsuristyle.livejournal.com]

<3<3<3
Okay, no lie, that second one is definitely my favorite because it turned me into a gooey pile of happy, happy goo. ShinTsuyo, why so adorable? XD
But I love the first one so much too! Because never-at-a-loss-for-words-on-tv Nakai would so totally be the shy embarrassed one, even after thirteen years XD
And the last one? Hot. And I like the contrast of Nakai pulling his cap down and Kimura looking up into the rain<3

also I am highly amused by your music choice XD

[g-pumpkin.livejournal.com]

Haha! Love! Sry that I don't have long "real" comments. These lil diamonds you're writing are just fhakin awesome. Kimura begging? Hmm...what an interesting idea...hard to picture this man begging. Can't wait to read more!