(SMAP) Simpler

[dictionarysays]

Simpler
Kimura/Goro | PG

I definitely wrote this in five minutes on the bus to school this afternoon on some ratty line paper I found in my backpack (thank god) while listening to Lion Heart on repeat. I keep having a TakuGoro itch, maybe this drabble'll be the start of something long? I hope so. I want to write more TakuGoro (woohoo for my first TakuGoro). 
              

                Goro’s evenings are simple: come in, feed his cats (SMAP’s usually waiting at her bowl when he gets in, but Jazz is another story and it takes another fifteen minutes of coddling him before Jazz has worked up an appetite), then fix himself a late dinner because he’s always loved eating late.

                Tonight’s no different and he’s completely immersed in a late night variety show, forking more stir fry from his plate when the doorbell rings.

Its past midnight so when he gets to the door he’s not expecting Kimura whose grinning and drenched (Goro had no idea it was raining so hard) and he lets himself in.  

                “Kimura?”

                “Mm,” Kimura acknowledges him and despite his unexpected appearance and the wet seaweed on his head that’s supposed to be his hair, he makes a beeline for the  living room, honing in on Goro’s dinner and starting in on that; managing to make himself comfortable.  

                Goro frowns, mostly out of confusion, a little bit out of awe and follows after him, scratching his head and staring, arms crossed. For a few moments the lights from the TV play off Kimura’s face, intent on finishing Goro’s plate off, chuckling past teriyaki sauce and red peppers when something funny happens on the screen.  

                “Why are you here?” Goro manages to murmur this softer than he wants to, stepping over and halting the chopsticks in Kimura’s hand. He looks up and smiles sheepishly at that, Goro makes a face because damp russet pieces of hair are all over his face and he clearly doesn’t care.  

                “I’m wet.” 

                “I noticed, but why do you have to be wet in here?” Kimura grabs part of Goro’s top and forces him down beside him, laughing and not making any room, which leaves Goro squished between the arm of the couch and a wet and itchy Kimura.

                Goro sighs.

                “Shizuka took the girls to see her parents,” he says it simply and Goro doesn’t ask anything more, because if anyone can’t stand being alone it’s Kimura and when he picks up the chopsticks again, mumbling something about this needing more meat and stares at the TV again, Goro loses against himself and smiles. Sort of.

                At three in the morning, after Kimura’s beat him at goldfish for the seventh time and they’re setting up the futon for Kimura to sleep on; it hits Goro that his nights might be simple, but sometimes the warmth growing in his stomach as Kimura asks for a pillow is simpler.

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[faiee.livejournal.com]

AWWW.

That was cute and sweet, and sort of heart breaking for Goro ALL the same. I've been needing my SMAP fic dose! After all the amazing 2Tops fics last week, this week was painfully quiet and I was hoping to see something this morning and tadah! :D YEAY you.

Jazz is another story and it takes another fifteen minutes of coddling him before Jazz has worked up an appetite
I love cats. And Jazz sounds super adorable -swoons- And I can just imagine Goro just coddling a little widdle cat. AWWW. -melts-

Its past midnight so when he gets to the door he’s not expecting Kimura whose grinning and drenched (Goro had no idea it was raining so hard) and he lets himself in.
Part of me thinks that Kimura is never grinning if he's all drenched, but I like it that he's HAPPY to be at Goro's :P Or somewhat sheepish, but trying very hard to hide it.

For a few moments the lights from the TV play off Kimura’s face, intent on finishing Goro’s plate off, chuckling past teriyaki sauce and red peppers when something funny happens on the screen.
Aww, won't it be fun if he saw himself on TV? I always imagine SMAP members staring at each other on tv. Hmmmmmmm. ;)

“I noticed, but why do you have to be wet in here?” Kimura grabs part of Goro’s top and forces him down beside him, laughing and not making any room, which leaves Goro squished between the arm of the couch and a wet and itchy Kimura.
EEP. JUST JUMP HIM GORO. JUMP HIM, NOW. Aww, darn, no he didn't :X Don't mistake me though, I really loved the sweetness of the whole fic, and it totally worked, but my overactive imagination just thought of something else immediately when Kimura pulled Goro down to the couch :P And when Goro's all squished and in close proximity and Kimura's wet, and Goro's probably that bit flushed. Oops, there goes my imagination again :X

Goro loses against himself and smiles. Sort of.
Stop that 'sort of'-ing Goro, you know you're hopelessly lost in his smile. DENIAL, I SAY. So apparently, I don't only talk to Nakai in my head these days. Sigh.

At three in the morning, after Kimura’s beat him at goldfish for the seventh time and they’re setting up the futon for Kimura to sleep on; it hits Goro that his nights might be simple, but sometimes the warmth growing in his stomach as Kimura asks for a pillow is simpler.
He should really be feeling warm all over and they could have spent all that time doing something better, like giving each other blowjobs But nooo, that was so sweet and sort of-ish heart breaking cause Goro's just SO into Kimura but he has Shizuka and all, and he's just content knowing he can make Kimura's lonely nights that bit less lonely. Poor thing ): And the fact he's actually happy and warm, should make me feel happy for him too, but I just feel all, SighGoro. ):

But it was sweet! And pretty! And you managed to make a sweet fluffy thing all so sad at once. I'm feeling all mixed emotions now. WHO SAYS YOU CAN'T WRITE DRABBLES?! Haha. Tsk you, you've just proven yourself wrong. So uhm, please get around to writing more? (Although I feel bad because who I am to ask you to oblige me when I've been so lazy lately.. :X)

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[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Hahah, guh, coming from you, my favourite SMAP-drabbler, it's total awesome. xDD

And man, I know! Every other day or so I'd go on to sxslash hoping there'd be a 'fic but no luck. Last week was srsly one of those once in a blue moon kinda' things I think, hahah. I've been having thousands of writing bursts a day for the past week or so but every time I went to write, nothing would come or the feeling had passed or I just got stuck with what I had and yeah. Can't wait for your next post, whenever that may be, I definitely read most of your 'fics yesterday out of a need for SMAP-fics and stat. :DD

Hahah, see, if I liked cats (I totally prefer dogs, cats don't seem like they need anyone P:), I'd definitely name mine Jazz. And it also felt lame yet apt enough for Goro to name his cat that (besides the uberly dorky SMAP-chan that is, hahah). He also sings a lot of Jazz so why not. ALSO! I want to see that man's cats! I think I've given up on the name thing but at least a picture or something. xDD

You're right! If anything, Kim' would be all, I'm wet, I'm cold and my hair's a mess. Let me in. /BLANK STARE--but I guess I like the image of a grinning and soaked Kim' more than anything else, hahah. /FANTASY PARTIALLY FULFILLED

Yesyesyes on the SMAP watching each other on TV. I think out of all of them, Kim' probably does it the most. I remember when there was the SxS special and they quizzed each other on their dramas and all, Kim' got them all right from what I remember. The sweetie~~ Admittedly though, first time I read what you said, the badbadbad part of my brain thought you might be referring to porn. ;DD But again, there goes my brain, down into the gutter.

Hahah, you're not the only one in terms of Goro needing to jump Kimura and now! I srsly wanted to write slash, I mean, a kiss or something, but the 'fic wouldn't let me. Wth. DD: I kept going back, trying to re-write, but I couldn't change a thing unless I wanted to change everything and yeah, it works this way too. It's just really fluffy is all and sad and stuff /SO COHERENT

I totally talk to all the SMAP members in my head at different times of the day, don't worry, hahah. Especially when they do frustrating things in 'fics and shows and whatnot. xDD I feel bad for Goro and yet I wrote, sheesh.

It probably doesn't help that Triangle just came on now too, it always kinda mellows me out in the bestest of ways~~

I HAVE A SUGGESTION. You should write the What Goro REALLY Should've Done version of this. HA. You don't have to actually of course, but all your thoughts, they're so true! And I totally wouldn't mind. ;DD Yeaaah, this turned out way more SighGoro than I thought it would. DD: I get the feeling all my TakuGoro from here on out is going to have angst to some extent. Curses!

BUT I'M SO GLAD YOU FOUND THIS SWEET AND SAD AND PRETTY AND SORTS OF OTHER THINGS! Hahah. :DD Shucks, I think drabbles are harder than one-shots tbh. So the fact you do 'em so often and extremely well? OI. I need to stealz some of ur skillz, yo. But yosh. I'll get to writing more if you get to writing more too. /DEAL?

You could write anything and I think I'd be ecstatic :DD

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[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

I was expecting this to be actual slash, so I was surprised! But pleasantly so, because it's so sweet and it... well, it works.

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'm glad it was sweet; takugoro is always hella sweet so it's hard to leave that out sometimes.

But yeah! I totally thought it was going to be slash too, I actually really wanted something slashy, but every time I looked back and tried re-writing, it wouldn't budge so it looks like I'll have to save the takugoro slash for another 'fic.

Thanks again, though! A well, it works is good. :DD

P.S. I don't think I've ever mentioned this, but your icon, it's Shingo's black rabbit right? I always notice but haven't said a thing about it 'til now.

[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

It's Shingo's black rabbit alright.

I was so fascinated by that story. I even wrote about it.

[25lalalee36.livejournal.com]

Cute, cute, cute...I wonder why it is...I don't like GoroxKimura much,but every time anyone writes about them, it just feel right...
It's sweet...Kimura, who can't stand to be alone and
Goro and his simple nights...
BTW: The names of cats? > LOL

[pu-ni-yo.livejournal.com]

Love it ^^
It was such a lovely cute fic ^^
A lonely wet Kimura and a yasashii Goro are the best ^^

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

yay, TakuGoro. I do want more TakuGoro.

a part of me wants MORE SLASH, but this part is always present and will always want it so I think you can safely ignore it, while the rest of me says that I really enjoyed this under-the-surface feeling. it is kind of heartbreaking, but the heartbreaking is under the surface too so it's not that painful and it makes the whole thing cute. and then perhaps Goro is the only person that can have a wet, grinning Kimu on his couch, eating his food, and not jump him. I'm actually full of admiration for his self-restraint. ;P

but omg, Goro's cats. every mention of Goro's cats is win and lol, their names. Jazz is actually a sweet name and SMAP is just something Goro could come up with. I've been trying to figure out some names for my Goro's cats but I still haven't got any, except that I'm really convinced that one of them might be Takuya. but then I don't know what about the other, because even Goro wouldn't name a cat after himself I hope. XD

obviously a wet Kimu is another win!mention just because he's wet. and then I can imagine him actually taking of his wet wet shirt on his way to Goro's couch and throwing it to the floor and expecting Goro to bring him a towel or something. but perhaps this is a wrong direction and not that sweet. because the fic is sweet and it's the best like that.

Goro loses against himself and smiles. Sort of.
this really got me because it's so bittersweet and so Goro at the same time and just unf.

and "just unf" would probably be my universal response to your fics. <3

[girltype.livejournal.com]

YES.YES.YES. This my kind of fic, that slight heartbreak for Goro when it comes to Kimura and Shizuka. Love it.

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

TakuGoro is just bittersweet all over, aren't they? But I love them at the same time, too, it's nice to see members so close even outside of work.

But TYSM. This just was one of those badboys I needed to regurgitate. 8DD