(SMAP) Chew or I Chews You

[dictionarysays]

Chew or I Chews You
Nakai/Kimura | PG | 100 words


He’s nearly done untying the knot in his scarf when Kimura walks in. Nakai’s ear burns when the taller man touches his elbow. They stay like that.

“You deserved it, yanno.” The words are gruff, but when Nakai chances a glance, the grin on his band mate’s face socks him in the gut.

He doesn’t say I know because he already does.

Nakai scoffs instead and shrugs his hand off like it’s easy. The next moment he’s sputtering and Kimura’s latched onto his ear with his teeth.

He hisses through flesh and nerves, “This is what I wanted to do...”


Omg. My first drabble. DD8 This is supposed to be the start of smth good. Meaning, I want to get back on track with those other fics I kinda started for the SMAPmeme and a threesome I started last night and ugh. idk how you do these faiee , and so well!

Comments

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

SHITFUCK. THERE'S BITING~~~~!

/she will be back.

/and it didn't take her long

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

you just made the cutest 2top moment into a hothothot 2top moment, because omg biting, but also omg your writing. I missed it. I mean, how many good things can you pack into a 100 words? [doesn't quote because quoting a whole fic is not cool, no matter how short it is... except that does quote, just a little?] He doesn’t say I know because he already does. guh. it took me three times to understand this sentence [not at your best today, brain?] but when I finally did, guhhh, it's such a win sentence! and then there's biting, fuck. :Q___ and then! this might just be overinterpretation at its finest, but “This is what I wanted to do...”, the three dots at the end [lol, it must have a name in English, but fuck if I know right now] suggest that there is something more Kimu wants to do to Nakai? there always is. but we will never know~ oh but I know exactly and omg, have I mentioned biting? 8D

no words will express how happy I am you are writing again. ♥ and you did a drabble, drabbles are so damn hard. and other fics? and did you say threesome? I can't wait. can't can't can't. *dies in flames flails* ♥ ♥ ♥

Re: /and it didn't take her long

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Ahaha, you're always too sweet! And awesome. Your comment is like, thrice the length of the drabble. xDD

But dood. I'm sorry, anything to do with 2TOP always has a very high probability of being twisted into smth hotter. They're already hot to start with anyway. But yeah, like, wtf, I don't even know where this came from! I was going to bed and suddenly I was grabbing for the scrap of paper on my bedside table and then I was scribbling and kiiinda' laughing at the fact that your biting fetish is totally catching onto me. Your fault! But a good blame. :Q____

Psssh. Kimura always wants to do more to Nakai we don't need fic to know that. ;DD

Ohman. I miss writing too. TBH? I have no idea how I'm going to write this threesome. I have enough trouble with just two. ;A; But gdi, I really wanna' and I have some sort of hazy idea formed and like a page written so we'll see i am currently not getting your hopes up nor mine because chances of suckage is high.

ALSO SPEAKING OF WRITING I OBVS READ YOUR ENTRY WITH THE CUTE SKULLS AND THE MENTION OF TAKUGORO FIC AND OMG, I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW FUCKING ECSTATIC I WAS. STILL AM. AND JUST. ADSLKHFGHFILLJSJL. TAKUGORO FIC. WRITTEN BY YOU. /prepared to die a million deaths to read this 8DDDDD

So yeah. JS. &hearts&hearts

Re: /and it didn't take her long

[hereticpop.livejournal.com]

I know, pure 2top cuteness doesn't exist, it's always contaminated with the hot. but wherever it is that it came from, it must be a good place! also yay, a new convert! ^.^ but I think it's lucky, because when I take over the world, biting will become a common way of expressing your feelings to your person, next to kissing. *nodnod* then all people will start to look like victims of abuse on a daily basis and everyone will be happy.

I feel you, threesomes are tricky [and I'm not even talking about positions :P]. but I believe in youuuuu. also, too late, my hopes are already up. 8D

but pfffff, that takugoro fic? as I expected, so far it's going as slowly and painfully as a certain part of anatomy into a certain orifice and this is not my comparison but my gay friend's, okay? but if you're looking forward so, I'll beg you for a beta? but god knows when. D:

ohhh, what a sexy new header you got there. <33

[misherru.livejournal.com]

Oh yes. 8D

And it'll be lovely to read more of your stuff! Looking forward to it! :)

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Ahaha. I'm takin' that as a good sign. 8DD

And aww, thanks! The same goes for you too, missy. Your 2TOP is great. ;DD

[25lalalee36.livejournal.com]

OMG, today is my lucky day...
A return of Kimura-the vampire...
Please let there be a continuation of this...Cause Kimura+biting= the sexiest thing ever! (alright now you know all about my fetish LOL) Thank you sooooo much(actually was repeating that scene like thousand times tonight (then took a shower :P)) and I come back, find this and guess what? I can go to take another... )

[dictionarysays.livejournal.com]

Don't worry, bb, I knew of your fetish i mean--fetish? what fetish? a long time ago. And I can't blame you either because holy majoly! It. Is. Hot. And with all the biting Kim' does, anyway, how are we not supposed to get ideas? 89

Ahaha, it's my pleasure. It's 2TOP's and heretic's fault. And I'm sure that scene'll go down in 2TOP history~ &hearts&hearts

[25lalalee36.livejournal.com]

Than that's a relief... (fetish, who talked about fetish :P) I loved it when Kimura-kun was bitting when his team won during Bistro (Give us back Croco Kimura LOL) I'm sure that he has the Vampire complex as well (or he should follow the idea of Kogure-san and act some nice vampire-role, oh pretty please~)
Oh, there's no way it would be missed from their history... Just.No.Way... I just couldn't not notice, how small Nakai-kun's hand is when he caught Kimura's...It was soooo adorable... Yeah, it's their own damn fault...

(sorry for being random...Just finished translating and I have the white fluff in my head and feel like my brain will never come back (that's what happens when you have a LOTR marathon over the week, God bless the uncut editions)

[yue-akuma.livejournal.com]

UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *flails*

TOO SHORT, TOO SHORT! *flails some more*

Now have a shitload of hearts to express my love: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ... etc...

[faiee.livejournal.com]

I really need to get around to watching end talks. I sometimes skip some of them - AND THIS IS WHAT I GET. (Which one is this one?)

This is awesome! I clearly dunno what's going on (since I missed some end talk didn't I? -.-) AND I THINK IT'S SUPER HOT.

I was gonna say I'm missing SMAP fics and there you are :D And it has biting. ON THE EAR ♥ ♥ ♥ GUH

[ficofthegoblin.livejournal.com]

Ah!? *_*
Well, that took me by surprise. IN THE BEST POSSIBLE WAY.
You and your hints! You always leave a person wanting MORE.

[g-pumpkin.livejournal.com]

Oh hell...I saw the "100 words" and thought oookkk...then it was DAMN! THAT WAS FHAKIN AWESOME! SO MUCH IN SO LITTLE AND NOW MY BRAIN IS WHIRLING AND WANTING MORE! *deep bows*