Date: 2010-09-11 10:48 am (UTC)
SIGH. I just lost a comment because I pressed "back" accidentally -smacks forehead- ARGH. But anyway, I'm going back to italicising stuff manually simply because it's so much easier to read! So as I was saying (before I stupidly got rid of my whole comment..) -

before wandering over to a Nakai who was quiet and on his own.
I'm gonna end up quoting about every line that has Nakai in this fic :X I'M SORRY. But I love how you slipped that in. He strikes me as a tad lonely sometimes, because Goro has Kimura, and Tsuyoshi has Shingo... And I'm not sure, but it seemed like Nakai was close to Mori in some ways (well, considering he BAWLED at the final ep with Mori). Although, I like to think more that Nakai just loves all of SMAP, and he refuses to choose a favourite.

so he masturbates, frustrated and quick, losing it in just over a minute and completely spent
At the risk of sounding like a perv, I'm gonna quote this line because it's just so perfect at describing how Kimura's desperate for something that would take away his frustration, even if only for a moment.

Some phone calls aren’t all that bad.
Shingo's a dear, and he really doesn't even like phone calls in the first place. I love how he calls Kimura to sorta check on him and make sure the dude's alright - but he knows Kimura wouldn't tolerate any checking on so he just veils the whole thing with cheeriness.

P.S. Okay I spotted another Nakai line and I so wanted to quote it, but I didn't have anything intelligent to say about it other than YESNAKAIISTORTURINGHIMSELFTOO - but that's not the point of this fic so I settled for a little post note (and a cute Nakai icon to let himyou know I love him ;) )
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