so as I was saying before lj ate my comment gaaaah, come on. there's so much emotion in it, it's practically swimming and leaking and storming. it's heavy with emotion. it's sdfghjdsawserdtgyuhji. like that. I can't really express it because the hotness (of which there are also huge amounts) fried my brain. or it would have fried my brain, had I had any to begin with. but now I only have 2tops humping against a wall of my skull. [is that sick or what?] oh my gosh.
listening to Goro say something about cat litter and studies proving its hair healing qualities LOL. having cats and hair and Goro in one hilarious sentence is WIN. and it's really sneaky because I was laughing and didn't see coming what was coming later.
Shingo and Tsuyoshi share a look; Shingo tries not to crack a smirk. I LOVE that they know.
He pushes his hands into his pockets and looks at the long bathroom mirror instead. I can SO see it, Kimura not saying anything and just standing there and staring. he's so good at staring. and the way Nakai is angry and tells him to get out is extremely hot. it's like, "I hate you because I can't resist you." "I know and I don't give a shit, I want you." "Let's fuck."
the poisonous expression on his face makes Kimura forget about everything that’s pretty beneath it for a quick second. “Fuck you,” Nakai says this without missing a beat, meeting Kimura’s gaze and holding it. It’s hard and it burrows past Kimura’s insecurities and he thinks it’s that heat that brings him forward. so am I quoting whole paragraphs now? but seriously, every sentence of it is amazing, sharp and full and just wow.
(his jeans were stilling the trembles) shit. just, shit. <3
yay, the beanie makes a return! I'm really supporting the presence of beanie during dirty bathroom encounters.
I just absolutely adore how they have history and how it's all not supposed to be happening but neither of them can help it. and how Nakai keeps telling Kimura how he hates him and Kimura ignores him. I mean, can there be anything hotter and at the same time so full of complicated emotions underneath? because it is so full, in the way all they say is completely unimportant and unneccessary and the things they feel are in their touches and shivers and reactions. I am bathing in it like whoah and it makes me so happy. :D
And then Nakai stretches up and pulls Kimura’s mouth down to his. ah~ that kissing is just so HOT. except that I think I might be repeating HOT in this comment a little bit too often and I should come up with some more original expressions. it's basically pushing all my buttons, in the right way. seriously.
and it's steadily becoming more and more, because they do it against a door and Kimura puts fingers into Nakai's mouth and even then Nakai is still able to tell him how he hates him and
his ragged groan follows the muted thwack of Nakai’s forehead hitting the door
and
He claws at the doorjamb, anything to stop his surrender
and
Nakai mewls because Kimura is still too good and his focus turns into a needlepoint built on desire, pain and doorframes.
and so much more - there are so many little details that build up the whole picture.
and I think this Kimura presses his sticky forehead to his shoulder and bites down hard just basically finished me off because 1. I love biting, 2. I love Kimura doing the biting, 3. after all those bistros no one is going to convince me that he doesn't do such things because I can see it and it's a mindblowing sight.
the last line rocks hard and that's all I have to say about it.
...did I say it was HOT?
but honestly it was. and I don't just mean the sex, their whole dynamic is hot like hell, the outward hostility, the way they try to deny themselves (mostly Nakai) and a hundred other things that they are not saying, just resolving to a quick fuck in the bathroom.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS AND I LOVE YOU. and thank you for writing more 2top. I know it's frustrating because I keep talking about writing other pairings and end up writing only them too. but you really can't be angry with them when they do this *points to the fic*.
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so as I was saying before lj ate my comment gaaaah,come on. there's so much emotion in it, it's practically swimming and leaking and storming. it's heavy with emotion. it's sdfghjdsawserdtgyuhji. like that. I can't really express it because the hotness (of which there are also huge amounts) fried my brain. or it would have fried my brain, had I had any to begin with. but now I only have 2tops humping against a wall of my skull. [is that sick or what?] oh my gosh.listening to Goro say something about cat litter and studies proving its hair healing qualities
LOL. having cats and hair and Goro in one hilarious sentence is WIN. and it's really sneaky because I was laughing and didn't see coming what was coming later.
Shingo and Tsuyoshi share a look; Shingo tries not to crack a smirk.
I LOVE that they know.
He pushes his hands into his pockets and looks at the long bathroom mirror instead.
I can SO see it, Kimura not saying anything and just standing there and staring. he's so good at staring.
and the way Nakai is angry and tells him to get out is extremely hot. it's like, "I hate you because I can't resist you." "I know and I don't give a shit, I want you." "Let's fuck."
the poisonous expression on his face makes Kimura forget about everything that’s pretty beneath it for a quick second. “Fuck you,” Nakai says this without missing a beat, meeting Kimura’s gaze and holding it. It’s hard and it burrows past Kimura’s insecurities and he thinks it’s that heat that brings him forward.
so am I quoting whole paragraphs now? but seriously, every sentence of it is amazing, sharp and full and just wow.
(his jeans were stilling the trembles)
shit. just, shit. <3
yay, the beanie makes a return! I'm really supporting the presence of beanie during dirty bathroom encounters.
I just absolutely adore how they have history and how it's all not supposed to be happening but neither of them can help it. and how Nakai keeps telling Kimura how he hates him and Kimura ignores him. I mean, can there be anything hotter and at the same time so full of complicated emotions underneath? because it is so full, in the way all they say is completely unimportant and unneccessary and the things they feel are in their touches and shivers and reactions. I am bathing in it like whoah and it makes me so happy. :D
And then Nakai stretches up and pulls Kimura’s mouth down to his.
ah~ that kissing is just so HOT. except that I think I might be repeating HOT in this comment a little bit too often and I should come up with some more original expressions. it's basically pushing all my buttons, in the right way. seriously.
and it's steadily becoming more and more, because they do it against a door and Kimura puts fingers into Nakai's mouth and even then Nakai is still able to tell him how he hates him and
his ragged groan follows the muted thwack of Nakai’s forehead hitting the door
and
He claws at the doorjamb, anything to stop his surrender
and
Nakai mewls because Kimura is still too good and his focus turns into a needlepoint built on desire, pain and doorframes.
and so much more - there are so many little details that build up the whole picture.
and I think this
Kimura presses his sticky forehead to his shoulder and bites down hard
just basically finished me off because 1. I love biting, 2. I love Kimura doing the biting, 3. after all those bistros no one is going to convince me that he doesn't do such things because I can see it and it's a mindblowing sight.
the last line rocks hard and that's all I have to say about it.
...did I say it was HOT?
but honestly it was. and I don't just mean the sex, their whole dynamic is hot like hell, the outward hostility, the way they try to deny themselves (mostly Nakai) and a hundred other things that they are not saying, just resolving to a quick fuck in the bathroom.
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS AND I LOVE YOU. and thank you for writing more 2top. I know it's frustrating because I keep talking about writing other pairings and end up writing only them too. but you really can't be angry with them when they do this *points to the fic*.